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So that’s what a fresh voice means!

How amazing is this?

After reading Lisa’s novel What Kate Did Next, I said to myself. Now that’s what publishers mean when they say they’re looking for a fresh voice.

All of a sudden I get it. It’s not about being a GREAT writer. Let’s face it, we’re not all meant to be GREAT writers. In fact trying too hard to be a GREAT writer can make you not such a great writer in the end. The secret is to be different but be yourself.

To my delight, when I went snooping around Lisa’s website, I found a great article she’d posted about finding your voice. It is well worth a read. http://www.lisaheidke.com/writing-news.html  In a nutshell, it’s about being real. That’s what I loved about Lisa’s Kate Cavandish. She is real. I related to her so much and I am neither wife, mother nor photographer. There is just ‘something’ about the way Lisa handles the every day, yet it still well-paced and entertaining.

I think the other thing that resonated with me as a writer is that there were no life and death moments, no obvious hero, no all-consuming love. This is a woman’s story — a real woman like so many struggling to balance work, her family and her dreams. (The best scene is actually a lustful moment Kate has that is interrupted by her young son. Absolutely gorgeous and refreshingly different! You’ll have to read the book. LOL)

What Kate Did Next is about the everyday, grounded by the ordinariness (is that a word?) of life, but lifted by its possibilities.

What I loved about this book
Kate’s sister. What a character. She made me laugh out aloud.

What I learned by reading this book
Aside  from the “Oh my God, that’s what publishers mean by a fresh voice thing”, I learned that sex doesn’t have to be real to be satisfying !!!!!!!  (Again, you have to read the book LOL)

It has inspired me to find that voice.

BLURB – What Kate Did Next
Meet Kate Cavendish – housewife and mother of two – as she dips her toes back into the workforce while trying to juggle kids, a work-obsessed husband, lust for her son’s soccer coach, and much, much more …

Her husband’s a workaholic, her kids are growing up – now it’s time for Kate to follow some of her own dreams …

This is the often comical but also wry account of the life of mother of two, Kate Cavendish. It seems like only yesterday that Kate was one of the most well-regarded photographers in town. So how, she wonders, did her life come to consist of so much drudgery, not to mention dealing with a recalcitrant, eye-rolling teenage daughter and an often-absentee husband. And why oh why did her young son have to score such a distractingly gorgeous soccer coach?

Find our more about Lisa and her novels http://www.lisaheidke.com/home.html

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I’m talented!

Two ordinary words giving this struggling writer an extraordinary boost.

I received a rejection letter today, and follwoing on from my whinge about rejections letters a few weeks ago, I thought I should post it.  I’m sure the agent has no idea of the impact she’s had simply by taking the time to type those two ordinary words.

 Dear Jenn:

Thanks for sending your pages. You write very well and I can see why your ms has done so well. Unfortunately, however, I think this might be tough to place with a trade house here in the current market. The “lost memory” is very common and I’m finding it difficult, absent something radically different, to successfully place.

Good luck with your work- you are very talented.

Thank you Ms Marsal. There are some people in the industry who could learn a thing or two from you.

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I love a rejection!

Yes I love a rejection—not that I’ve had many (you have to actually submit to get a rejection) but at least when I’ve received the odd thanks-but-no-thanks email reply (automated or personalised) it tells me that my m.s landed in the intended target’s inbox.

What I find harder to take than a rejection is no reply at all.

Okay, so agents are the busiest people on the planet. But since they can also apparently tell if they’re going to love you by your opening line and your query letter, my question is this:

Why, when an agent finally gets around to opening an email submission, can’t they hit the reply button straight away, insert a pre-written rejection note using the signature option in Windows Mail (an excellent device for all sorts of standard stuff if you haven’t already discovered it) and click send.

Possibly, in my case, it’s the tears from all their laughing—or should that be crying—that’s blurring their vision! But at least when I get the rejection email (one rejection equals one submission these days) I can go to my snazzy submission tracking spreadsheet (I call it snazzy because it’s all colour-coded and pretty) and I turn the green submission sent cells to red submission rejected cells. End of story (pardon the pun!)

Instead my spreadsheet is all amber, amber, amber. (That’s what I do to green cells at the three month mark when there’s been no reply. It’s not a big red no – yet – so I make it amber, in anticipation of a no!)

The truth is, I just don’t like amber. There’s no closure in amber and that’s why I love a rejection. At least after a rejection I can red it, rule it out, go to the next green.
The following rejection letter made me laugh, and while it has nothing to do with writing it did make me wonder if I should model a response to my next rejection – LOL